I have written my undermistletoe entry for Monday, and now it just needs a critical eye. Anyone up for it? It's about 13 pages, and the prompt was "When enemies marry (Clex or Chlex)".

Oh, and it's NC-17 to the power of a zillion.

Sooo...

I have two things for beta. One is Three Balls and a Baby.

The other?

Is All American.

Any takers?

For the first, I'm looking for the usual - Americanizing spelling, pointing out when I sound overly stupid, and one specific plot issue which I'll explain.

For All American, it's something that's been sitting on my hard drive for at least a year. When I started that AU, I had planned to jump around chronologically and try to construct the world that way -- but soon enough, I started chugging along a regular old timeline. But this story, if I posted it, would *definitely* shatter all that. So yeah, I guess I'm looking for a gut reaction, more than anything.