This is perfect - I think John is most endearing when he's playing stupid, and for so much of this story, Rodney thinks he's *actually retarded*, and it's... hilarious. Plus, men who wear anything that says "Grrls" (ESPECIALLY ON THE ASS) is automatically awesome.
I really loved how you brought it so believably back to Atlantis, too. Although are we really supposed to believe that *Kavanaugh* kept Atlantis running for four years? And having Zelenka be a rock-climber was genius.
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