Thanks! I'm surprised by the response to that fragment in particular -- it's a bit of a departure for me in style and usually those are met with less interest.

I particularly love the two intimate encounters between Katie and Rodney -- they are thoroughly believable and even touching.

Yes, I think they're my favorite bits too. I like the idea of McKay being just as fumbling and clueless in bed with Katie as he is in conversation -- and knowing that it's somehow just not *him*. Thanks!