just commenting to say that this is a fantastic story - you have the rare gift of writing children that are actually charming to non child enthusiasts. Brodie is wonderfully grubby and inconvenient and convincing - I was really hoping he and C could move into L's penthouse and live Happily Ever After. I couldn't stand Jonathon in this (never can, blame AlMiles) but then you started redeeming him..
Please keep going. I know it's a pain when the momentum has died on you, and if you are choking on it and have to set it aside, well then, too bad for us. Thank you for posting what you have so far - it's a finely told story.
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just commenting to say that this is a fantastic story - you have the rare gift of writing children that are actually charming to non child enthusiasts. Brodie is wonderfully grubby and inconvenient and convincing - I was really hoping he and C could move into L's penthouse and live Happily Ever After. I couldn't stand Jonathon in this (never can, blame AlMiles) but then you started redeeming him..
Please keep going. I know it's a pain when the momentum has died on you, and if you are choking on it and have to set it aside, well then, too bad for us. Thank you for posting what you have so far - it's a finely told story.